Sunday, 21 March 2010

A2 Coursework Evaluation.

Independence: Is Private worth the Price?

Produced by: Susie Richardson and Matt Turner










1. In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?



For our A2 coursework, we decided to do a documentary as we believed it would present us with the challenge of finding interviewees that linked to an interesting topic and would be absorbing through the development of our ideas. We used real life documentaries to link to with our own documentary. The main chain of documentaries we used to link to was Channel 4 Dispatches. We felt that they would be good to link to as they focused on interesting topics and we felt that our documentary would fit in well with the conventions that Channel 4 used when creating their Dispatches documentaries.






We wanted to choose a contemporary topic to focus our documentary round. Firstly, we chose the topic of talent and how many teenagers are not part of the stereotypical image that the media has constructed. Our title of our documentary originally read: 'Talent: Nature vs. Nurture', constructing the argument of whether talent is created by either our genes, or the environment around us. The media constructs the idea that all teenagers are part of the hoody/gang/knife culture, and that they go against the norms and values of society as a whole. Although, many documentaries nowadays include information and prejudice towards teenagers which focus around the crimes that are committed by teenagers and the trouble and chaos that is caused as a result of teenagers growing up in society today. However, it is never considered that these crimes are committed as a result of young people being rejected from society. We also looked at Wall to Wall Production Company, which produced documentary films such as Man on Wire,which focused on the man who walked between the Twin Tower buildings on a tightrope. We looked at this documentary film for inspiration on the layout and planning of our own.




And so, as a way of challenging some of the conventions of a real documentary, we chose a topic that challenged the idea of teenagers being associated with knife culture, and tried to portray and represent them in a more positive light. This is why we chose to focus on talent, and how teenagers have good qualities as well as, in some cases, bad ones.

However, more planning took place, and throughout the development process of our ideas and due to technical setbacks, we changed our topic so it focused around education. We wanted to challenge the argument of Private vs. State and create a debate within our documentary. Within this, however, we included a teenager, who had had experience in schools of each sector. Although we had changed our topic, we wanted to still highlight the idea of talent, but we put it into context with whether private schools had more facilities and opportunities for talent to develop and mature. We decided to interview a number of people who had a certain amount of experience in this field. We chose Jonathan Bond, a semi-pro footballer who plays for Watford and Wales, who moved to a state school after previously being at a private sector school, as well as two of our teachers who have both had experience in teaching in both sector schools. So, our title now read:

Independence: Is Private worth the Price?

We decided, however, to stick to a lot of the conventions of a typical documentary. For example, at the beginning of most Dispatches documentaries, they have the title of 'Dispatches: *TheTopic*' As we were meant to create an extract of a documentary, we decided to go for a middle section of the film, where no credits needed to be created.
A convention of a typical Dispatches documentary is the titles on the interviewees. Although Dispatches uses a white font, which we did also, it has a different effect that brings the title in and takes it out again. Although both effects are fades, they are different, and we thought this would be a subtle yet slightly obvious change, but in effect, we followed the conventions of the documentary here also.

In this screen shot, you can see that the titles are almost similar, however the effect is different, which is not clear.







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These two screen shots show the similarities and conventions we followed in regards to the titles of the interviewees.




More ways in which we followed the conventions in our documentary include the way we interviewed our interviewees. In Dispatches documentaries, most of their interviews are done in the same place, they interview people in their own surroundings which in effect, is also what we wanted to achieve, however, we interviewed our subjects in different places to give a sense of interest to the documentary, a sense of excitement rather than the same place and the same person. For example, we took footage of the school rugby team playing at the fields and embedded it into our film when one of our interviewees, Jonathan Bond, was talking about the differences of Rugby and Football as main sports in Private and State sector schools. This video shows an example of Channel 4 documentaries interviewing people in the same surroundings as the establishing shots. The fact that we included the rugby footage gives a clear sense of a private school atmosphere, which we thought was a good angle and part to feature as it gave a clear sense of a debate and included real material of private school life, creating a debate in itself. Again, we followed the conventions of a typical documentary as it’s certainly a convention that people are interviewed in situ, so that there’s a clear link between where they’re filmed and the topic they are discussing.












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Although we went against the conventions of a typical documentary made by Channel 4, we followed the rules of a lot of the conventions also. For example, for our ancillary poster, which was a newspaper advert, we used the same layout as a poster for the Channel 4 Dispatches poster. This is the layout of a Channel 4 poster, compared with our own:








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As said before, a lot of where we either followed the conventions or challenged them was technically. So the titles were almost the same as the channel 4 ones, with white block writing and a small font in the bottom left hand corner of the shot.








Between each shot we used additive dissolves, which is a simple fade effect. This is the effect that real documentaries use when editing the documentary and including transitions. The shots we used were also similar, in the sense that we had a variety of establishing shots, mid shots and close ups to add variety to the footage. We did not use panning when we were filming, as this is not a typical convention of the shots used in documentaries.








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At the start of the documentary we used statistics that we had found during the research and planning stage of our coursework. We used InDesign, a computer programme to create the newspaper layout effect, which we thought was effective as this topic is very much a political problem and area that is high up in discussion at this point in time. We followed the convention of having statistics in our documentary to break up the footage and add interest and visuals to our documentary, as unlike music videos or films, there are many different things and shots happening, documentaries can follow the role of footage upon footage, so we thought that this statistics idea would be good to give the viewer a break and read some text. This is what it looked like when we had fully assembled our documentary.








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In many documentaries, there is a voiceover that is placed over footage that maybe needs an explanation. This is known as ‘the voice of God’, since the voice is unseen but is the authority that guides the viewer regarding what they should think regarding the context of the narrative. We used a voiceover over the statistics pages and when introducing the different interviewees. We had a balance of following and challenging the conventions of a documentary as we wanted to make the documentary as lifelike as possible, however put a personal spin on it as students.
















2. How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?








We were given a choice of ancillary tasks to choose from in the brief for our Advanced Portfolio Coursework. The options for a documentary were:








- A double page spread magazine article




- A radio trailer




- A newspaper advertisment








We chose the radio trailer and the newspaper advertisement. We wanted to create a good link between our main product and the ancillary tasks that we created in terms of the distribution and advertising of our documentary. As our documentary had a lot of audio information, we thought a radio trailer would be good to condense this information down into a 30 second clip of the vital information we wanted to create through the production of our documentary. As well as this, a radio trailer is a completely different media text to a paper advertisement, which gives variety to the selection of media products we selected in the development and production of our project.








For the newspaper advertisement, we thought this would be a good chance to again follow the conventions of a normal media product of channel 4. We followed the conventions of the posters and adverts created by channel 4 on their documentaries.








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We decided against creating the magazine spread as we felt that this was quite time consuming and we would not have enough written information to fill the space of the double spread. We also ran ahead on filming time as we had technical setbacks as many of our interviewees had to pull out last minute. However, we felt that the radio trailer would give a good opportunity to condense the audio information, and the poster would do the same but with a visual effect. Also with a magazine spread, there would be new software that we would have to learn about, which again adds to the time issue, and neither of us had the technical or creative experience to create the magazine spread.








As I have said previously, we tried as much as possible to make our ancillary poster resemble a real channel 4 poster. As our target audience is primarily teenagers and also the parents of these teenagers, we wanted to attract them. As channel 4 has become a majorly popular channel in recent years, it would be reasonably simple to attract teenagers and adults up to the age of around 40. Channel 4 shows a variety of programmes that attract all ages, from 'Glee', '90210' and The 'inbetweeners' to 'Desperate Housewives' and 'Come Dine With Me'. We felt that because channel 4 programmes are so popular, if we followed the conventions of the original poster we would be able to get through to our target audiences reasonably well.








The good link between the ancillary tasks and the main product was a main factor we wanted to achieve. To do this we used many of the aspects, visuals and audios that we used in our main product and incorporated them into our ancillary texts. For example, the picture on the ancillary poster is also used at the beginning of the documentary as footage, this is a big link between the main product and the ancillary tasks in terms of visual effects.








As we didn't have credits at the beginning of our extract, it was hard to try to link the font between the main and ancillary tasks. Although, the colour text in the titles of the interviewees is the same as the text colour of the poster. However, in the ancillary poster we followed the conventions of the typical channel 4 poster.
















3. What have you learned from your audience feedback?








During the planning stages of our documentary, we wanted to find out what our target audience wanted in a documentary and what they found entertaining. We wanted to meet their demands and entertain them whilst giving the documentary an interesting angle. We wrote up an eight-question questionnaire to ask teenagers at school. We made the questionnaire short but effective in gathering all the information we needed to find out what our target audience wanted. Initially, we based the questionnaire around what they liked in other documentaries, such as Dispatches, which we would intend to use the good aspects in our own documentary production. Initial questions were; “Do you prefer documentaries to be interesting, funny or factual?” and “Do you prefer radio or TV documentaries?” However, we decided to ask more direct questions about what our documentary should be like, and not what they liked in other documentaries. We asked more specific questions like “How long do you think our documentary should last?” and “Do you think our documentary should avoid bias?” These questions allowed us to find out exactly what our target audience wanted. We distributed 50 of the questionnaires, which we thought was a reasonable sample that would gather us a view that was representative of the sample we took. Out of the 50 that we distributed, we received 32 complete questionnaires, of around equal amounts of males and females between the ages of 17 and 40. This gave us a very representative sample of feedback. The feedback answered the questions that we had asked, and gave us ideas about how long our documentary should be, whether we should focus on one topic or more, and whether we should introduce humour into it as well. Most people said that they liked documentaries that focused on one topic, otherwise it resulted in confusion between the comparison of many topics. We also found that most of the teenagers said that they like to see humour in documentaries, however, as the topic we chose to focus on is a serious political matter we decided that humour may be slightly inappropriate. We approached people at our school and also state school pupils in Berkhamsted Town Centre. The feedback was very useful and it helped us greatly in the initial planning as well as moving onto the actual filming schedule and recording. Due to the feedback from the questionnaires, we decided that our documentary should focus more on being interesting rather than predominantly factual. We thought about the different ways that we could show this through our documentary, and we came up with the idea of including a lot of footage of our interviewees in action, giving the interviewees a surrounding and setting, for example, the footage of rugby in relation to Jonathan Bond's interview.








During the production stage of our documentary, we showed clips of our documentary to students in our year to gather feedback on what they thought of our work so far. We had very positive feedback, particularly from media students who could especially appreciate the lengths we had to go to to get this work done. The general impression we received was that we had a good balance between the factual and serious side of the topic of education, whilst making it entertaining to watch. This encouraged us to carry on at the same level throughout the rest of the documentary.








After assembling our documentary, we showed it to members of our target audience, including some of the people we gave the questionnaires to before starting to film our documentary. It gained a very positive reaction. Our sample told us that the documentary was very informative and interesting. We had a good balance between being 'enlightening' and 'entertaining'. The documentary followed the conventions of a real documentary in the way that we showed action footage as well as interview footage, which we thought was a good convention to follow, as it also gives the documentary a sense of realism. The product was as well received as we had planned. If we had another chance, we would probably have included less topics about education and done a more concentrated version. As we wanted to bring many different topics in, we felt it was probably too crammed together, and if done again, we would choose one of the topics and concentrate more on this. We should probably have done one major topic and included interviews from specialists in the one topic, as interviewees were a major problem in the planning of our documentary. However, we were very pleased with the documentary and our target audience’s reaction, which was far superior to what we had expected.
















4. How did you use media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?








Producing a documentary requires a lot of equipment and technology. We wanted to experiment with lots of different equipment. Although already familiar with the equipment from our AS Foundation Coursework Portfolio, our A2 work was much more advanced and required a lot more technological experience in the planning, filming and editing stages of our project.








From the very beginning of our coursework we were using technology. We used word processors such as 'Pages' for Apple Macs and Microsoft Word to write down our ideas and organise them in an order that was logical in the planning stage, for example: Brief, Introduction, History of Documentary, Synopsis etc.








During the process of our documentary-making, we used Blogger.com to create posts to update on the different processes we were using and going through. We blogged about such things as creating our ancillary tasks, starting to film our main product and what equipment we needed, and also the process of editing our documentary as well. Blogger was a simple and straightforward way of logging our progress throughout the project. It is all done online so there was no need to word process our ideas, print it off, and then lost the sheet somewhere along the line. The information was safe on the computer and looked good.








In regards to contacting our interviewees, this wasn't that difficult as two of them are our teachers and we could access them at school. However, Jonathan Bond, an ex pupil of the school we study at was more difficult to get hold of. We decided to get in touch with him through the use of Texting and Email. Email was simple as again it was through technology, quick, easy and it was easy for him to respond, whereas if we had set up a meeting or written to him by letter this would cause confusion and would be hard to follow through.








At the very beginning of the project in the planning stages, we took pictures of people acting as interviewees to get a sense of what would be a good background and angle to have the interviewee at. This was a good exercise as it gave us an idea of how to have the interviewees when actually filming for our documentary. Furthermore, during the planning stage, we used a Flip camcorder to document us interviewing people to get their opinions on documentaries. We asked similar questions to the questions asked in the questionnaire, for example:











  • Do you watch documentaries often?


  • Do you feel that documentaries are made and targeted at older people?


  • Would you watch documentaries more if you could relate to the issues raised within them?





As stated earlier, these questions were very useful in the planning stage of our documentary as this pushed us to focus on a topic that would be of interest to teenagers and encourage more teenagers to watch documentaries, as they are very versatile in the topics they raise and the way they are made.






We had the advantage of using Apple Macs when editing and assembling our documentary. When making creative projects, like documentaries or music videos, Macs are usually better and much more well equipped for the job. Macs have many different types of software that have been created for the making of these projects. iDVD, Garageband and Final Cut Express/Pro were all software material that we used when creating our documentary. Although Mac's are completely different to PCs, they are easy to learn how to use, and in the long run they are much more reliable and straightforward to use when creating a documentary, for example.






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We used Final Cut Pro, which was produced by Apple Inc. which is a video editing application. We used this to assemble, edit and digitise our documentary. There were issues here as we had previously used Final Cut Express, which is much easier to use whereas Final Cut Pro is much more difficult to digitise footage etc, however, we made our way around the obstacle and got used to a more complicated programme quite easily. Final Cut Pro was very useful as we could clearly watch the footage we had taken and decide which ones and sections to use in our real documentary and which ones to discard, or which ones we could change and edit. We had to use this programme as it was the software that was downloaded onto the computer we were using to work on. The digitising aspect was much harder as we used a HD Camcorder, and some of the leads were not connecting to the computer as well as we had hoped. When editing our footage, there were not any problems, however, we knew the editing had to be much more precise for it to look like a professional documentary, we had to take care of a few slips in the editing to make it look sharp and finished.






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Usually, in real documentaries, there is music in the background, this is usually at the beginning when the documentary is introducing someone or a place using establishing shots. However, as we decided on our documentary being an extract from the middle of the documentary, we felt that we did not need music. Also, there was the issue of commercial music, due to copyright laws, no one, including the groups who were producing a music video, were allowed to use commercial music, so we would have that setback to deal with as well as the effort to find a song as well as editing and creating our main documentary task. However, in terms of audio ambience, when the establishing scenes were showing, such as the rugby, we turned down the sound on these clips as we had a voiceover. But this gave the clip an ambience overall of the voiceover as well as the rugby sounds.






The internet was a major use of technology that we used throughout the production of our documentary. We used the internet to do our initial research at the beginning of our project, all the way through to documenting evidence of work and 'blogging' entries onto Blogger. It gave us the opportunity also to watch videos of existing documentaries on Youtube, a leading website which documents videos. This helped us to develop our ideas so that they followed some of the conventions of real media products.






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There were many other programmes we used for the construction of our documentary. One being LiveType, which is a programme that allows you to create titles as a separate video, which can be added to other videos. As, again, we had used this programme at AS Level, we were familiar with the settings and the way it worked. We used this programme when we were creating the newspaper articles with the statistics that fade onto them. For the information we used LiveType to create the text and exported it as a separate video and then lay it over the still image of the newspaper article on the timeline in Final Cut Pro.






Linking back to our ancillary tasks, for our radio trailer we used a programme called Cubase, which allowed us to create our audio footage for it. Cubase was easy to use, the computer is connected to a microphone, and the microphone records the speech and copies it onto the timeline in Cubase. The speech recordings can be saved and copied onto the timeline in Final Cut Pro. This is how we created our radio trailer. The audio footage can be edited and moved around in Final Cut and then exported as a file.






Finally, the last piece of software we used on the computer was iDVD. We used this to put our film onto a DVD. iDVD also allows you to choose a title menu that can match the genre of your work. Pictures and music can also be added to the main menu for the film and finally it can be burnt onto a DVD disc.






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Media technology was the main contributor to the production of our film. It was used from research in the planning stage, to the editing in the construction stage. Technology in the making of our documentary allowed us to improve and expand on our creative ability and allowed us to achieve many things such as the radio trailer and researching into the history of documentaries themselves.

Ancillary Tasks

For our ancillary tasks we chose a newspaper article and a radio trailer.

We started work on them as soon as we had planned for our main documentary. We planned quite a lot for the ancillary tasks, and as shown, we had planned the posters when we had our old topic. However, the layout changed, but we decided to keep the idea of the channel 4 sign and the 'Dispatches' title to make it look like a real Dispatches poster.

As our new topic was based around the private and state school sectors, we decided to take a picture of part of a private school and have this as the main picture on the poster and have the title, time and programme at the bottom in smaller print. We tried to follow the conventions of typical Dispatches posters as much as possible to further emphasise the features of the documentary.


Having put the planning for our ancillary task poster up, here is the finished poster that was created using Photoshop, gathering information and image ideas from Google.




Friday, 19 March 2010

Production...

After planning our documentary though storyboards and viewing, we started the filming process. We used Sony HD Camcorders to film the shots onto tapes. These were simple to use and set up. We used a tripod to steady the camera and took extra tapes so we had enough space to film the settings well.


For the rest of the production process, we used Final Cut Pro, In Design and LiveType to produce the various sections of our documentary on the screen. We used Final Cut Pro to edit the footage and set it together on a timeline, we also used this to manage the sound, like the voiceover in certain parts and the voices of the interviewees.
We used InDesign to create the background of the magazine articles that were featured in our documentary. We chose a template and changed the information so that it was focused around education and facts about education. We then used LiveType to create the facts that ran over the magazine articles. Assembling the magazine article was tricky as we had to insert the backdrop of the magazine into LiveType and move the credits so they would fit in the magazine space we had created.
We also used LiveType to create the titles of the people we interviewed and their profession. We used to effects that LiveType offered to make them fade in and out of the shot.
As we had used these programmes before we did not find the technical side challenging, but as previously stated, the precision of the cuts and sounds needed to be much better than before.

We have created a filming schedule to show what we filmed, where and when:



November 3rd 2009:
(4:30-6:00pm)
Film Jonathan Bond (professional footballer) interview
Want mostly mid shots, but close enough to read expressions.

November 7th 2009:
(10:30-12:00pm)
Film Berkhamsted School Rugby Team footage
Lots of different shots to show movement and activity, to contrast it with the interview shots.
Moving shots to again give it more energy and excitement. Panning round with the running rugby players?

November 10th 2009:
(1:30-2:00pm)
Film Sacha Van Straten (Berkhamsted Teacher) Interview and teaching footage
Film away from walls and surfaces (Jonathan Bond was too close to the wall.)
Again, mid shot, interviewee is central to the frame of the shot.

November 12th 2009:
(4:30-6:00pm)
Film Laura Francis (Berkhamsted Teacher) Interview and teaching footage
Interviewee to the left hand side of the shot, to create more of a debate, having the interviewees sitting in different places across the framing of the shots.

November 16th 2009:
(9:00-9:30am)
Film Berkhamsted School Quad Scene (opening scene)
Keep the camera on a tripod still, we want to speed up the footage to make it more engaging.

November 18th 2009:
(9:00-11:00am)
Film Jonathan Bond Excercise Action footage
Different ways in which to film him, on different machines to add variety, mirror shots? His reflection in the mirror.

Change of topic.

Originally, we had arranged to film different teenagers for our documentary on 'Talent: Nature vs Nurture'. We were going to film a professional footballer, Jonathan Bond, and Roman Kemp and band-mate Cameron Jones, who are expected to be rising stars in the music industry. We had arranged to film both Cameron and Roman in the recording studios where they were creating their album, however, we had a setback, as due to legal reasons, we were not allowed to film them in that setting and they were not allowed to talk about the development of the band. As well as this, we were not allowed to have hold of real footage of Jonathan Bond playing football, also for legal reasons.
So due to these setbacks, we have decided to change topics. We discussed what other contemporary issues are important at the moment that link in with teenagers. We decided that The Private and State school sectors were a political issue that stood high on society's agenda. We decided not to have ourselves in the documentary, as we could easily allow the documentary to side one way.
So, as a result of this decision, we decided to interview our Media Studies teachers, who had had experience of teaching in both Private and State sector schools. We thought that the teaching perspective would be quite interesting to focus on.
We also wanted to include the teenage perspective, so we accepted that we could not have footage of Jonathan Bond playing football, and filmed him in a gym instead. We interviewed him because he had had the jump from a private school to a state school very recently and we thought his input and opinion would be valued highly in the nature of our documentary. We asked about the differences in opportunities, teaching and flexibility to get an insider's view on this situation.
After some research and planning, we decided to name our new documentary:

'Independence: Is Private worth the Price?'

More planning...

While we were conducting our research, The Guardian newspaper brought out a DVD about the topic we were covering. It was called "We are the people we've been waiting for."



As we had changed topic, we needed as much research into the new field of topic as possible. This DVD covered a lot of the issues that we were interested in and that we were going to include in our documentary. The documentary explores the extent to which young people are being failed around the world due to the education system that was created around the time of the Industrial Revolution. It confronts our expectations of what our education systems should be achieving for our children. We thought this was very relevant to our documentary we were now producing and was very valuable as initial research. We also watched some Channel 4 Dispatches documentaries such as 'The Children Britain Betrayed'. Which was useful as it covered many of the same topics that we wanted to cover.

We thought more about what we could film for our actual documentary. We came up with the idea of sports such as Rugby, which is a typical private school sport, and maybe contrast it with football, which Jonathan Bond could talk about.

We started to log down our ideas and then put them into storyboards to make evidence of our progress.






Tuesday, 9 March 2010

Further planning took place...

After having confirmed our choice of the title, we got stuck into the research and planning side of the documentary. We wrote the synopsis, the brief, research into the history of documentaries, and target audiences.
Our documentary seemed like it would attract teenagers themselves, as well as the parents or teachers of these teenagers. We researched into 'Wall to Wall' which is a production company in itself which produces factual documentaries about topics that are similar to the one we chose. Their documentaries are shown on BBC channels and Channel 4. We thought that our documentary would probably be shown on Channel 4, as it conforms to many of the conventions of a typical 'Dispatches' documentary.
(http://www.walltowall.co.uk/)
Using this production company as research into our documentary, we thought that ours would probably be shown on a channel like Channel 4, and be shown at around 8:00pm as this is a typical time that a Channel 4 documentary would be shown.

As documentaries were slightly harder in terms of research than music videos, we decided to research as much as possible into production companies of documentaries, and some directors. One director of documentaries who is well known is Nick Broomfield. Broomfield is an english documentary-film maker. Broomfield films with a small crew, usually just himself and one or two camera operators. This gives his documentaries a distinctive style; and he is often in shot holding the sound broom, this style shows him as quite relaxed yet straight to the point that he is trying to get.
Broomfield was awared the BAFTA Lifetime Achievement Award for Contribution to Documentary, and was also given honorary doctorates from Essex and Surrey University. This shows his incredible commitment to the world of documentary making.
We watched snippets of some of his most famous work. We watched Aileen: The Life and Death of a Serial Killer, and the documentary he created on Heidi Fleiss when she was a major figure in the media; named Heidi Fleiss: Hollywood Madam. As said previously, Broomfield emits a certain style through his work, it is professional, yet he befriends the subjects, becomes their friend and through this, allows a relaxed atmosphere show through his work.
We wanted too, for our documentary to be professional yet stylish and relaxed, so we attempted to try to mimic some of the ways in which he achieved this. These being; being relaxed with the interviewees and asking straightforward questions that needed simple answers that were straight to the point.

Here is a clip of Broomfield's work:

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The work of Nick Broomfield influenced us in the way we made decisions and the way in which we created our documentary. Broomfield has a specific style that comes across strongly in his work. One of the ways in which we wanted to make our work similar is the way in which he introduces people as they come on screen, there is action shots and establishing shots showing them and there is a voiceover that explains who they are. This is what we did with all of our interviewees. I think this worked well as it allowed us to include some different shots and introduce a voiceover that is a typical convention of a real life documentary.
Another aspect of Broomfield's documentaries that attracted us was how friendly he is to his interviewees. We also wanted to include this aspect into our documentary. We constructed a simple and relaxed set of questions and asked them as if in a discussion. However, where Broomfield includes his speech in his footage, we decided to cut it out, because we were also relating to the conventions of the Dispatches documentaries, which cuts out the interviewers voice, however, the concept of the questions and the way it was done was influenced by Broomfield and his documentary on Aileen, especially.

We decided as a group to produce a questionnaire, that would create audience feedback on some ideas and questions we had about the genre and our ideas, and would contribute to the target audience we would choose. This is the questionnaire we came up with:
The feedback was very useful in developing our ideas for our documentary. We distributed them to a number of teenagers ranging from the age of 15 to 18. The majority of the students said they watched documentaries and found them factual. We wanted to gain this audience feedback to get some ideas and research on the background of documentaries. We found out that a lot of teenagers enjoyed the documentaries they could relate to more, this encouraged us further to stick with a topic that would focus around teenagers and relate to them.

Although this questionnaire was quite simple and to let us know if we were on the right track to producing something that teenagers would find interesting, we did not know a lot about what to put into the documentary and if teenagers would be interested in this.
So further on from the questionnaire, we showed a group of 8 people the documentary, and asked them what they thought.
Our first version of the documentary was mostly full of just the interviewees, and although we had talked about putting some establishing shots in and some moving shots to make it more interesting, we hadn't put this into action yet. However, we got the confidence and motivation to do this as 6 out of the 8 people who watched the documentary said that there needed to be a lot of establishing shots to make it more interesting and to allow them to stay focused on the documentary they were watching.
All 8 people also mentioned that the establishing shots should be while the interviewee was speaking, to break up the blocks of speaking.
4 out of the 8 people who watched the documentary also said they thought some screen freezes or pictures should be shown, but nothing specific was mentioned. This is when we thought of the idea of the statistic magazine pages. We thought this would fit well into the description of the freeze frame shots, with interesting information that would enable the people to decode the information and become an active viewing audience.